Improving simple sentences

See if you can improve this sentence by adding what is asked for?

My donkey pulls the cart.

  1. Add ‘on’ at the beginning of the sentence.
  2. Add ‘on’ at the end of the sentence.
  3. Add in some alliteration
  4. Add a simile.
  5. Drop in a relative clause.
  6. Add an adverbial.
  7. Improve the sentence in your own style.

 

6 Comments

  1. On Christmas my donkey pulls the cart.
    On Christmas my donkey pulls the cart, on the trail.
    On Christmas my dope donkey pulls the cart, on the trail.
    On Christmas my dope donkey pulls the cart, as fast as a cheater on the trail.
    On Christmas my dope donkey who, pulls the cart, as fast as a cheater on the trail.
    On Christmas my dope donkey who, pulls the cart happily, as fast as a cheater on the trail.
    On cool, chili Christmas my dope donkey who, pulls the red cart happily, as fast as a cheater on the bumpy trail.

  2. -1 On warm days, my donkey pulls the cart.
    -2 On warm days, my donkey pulls the cart, across the farm.
    -3 On warm days,my derpy donkey pulls the wooden cart, across the farm.
    -4 On warm days,my derpy donkey pulls the wooden cart as slow as a snail across the farm.
    -5 On warm days,my donkey who has grey fur and white spots pulls the cart
    -6 On warm days, my derpy donkey slowly heaves the wooden cart ,across the farm

  3. 1. On the summer holidays my donkey pulls the cart.
    2. My donkey pulls the cart on a sunny
    3.My donkey always drink before he pulls he cart
    4.My donkey always happily walks across the road as he pulls the cart
    5.My donkey pulls the cart which is always on the rocky road
    6.My donkey is always catious when he pulls the cart
    7.My intelligent donkey drags the cart on the hilly mountains.

  4. 1. On the weekends my donkey pulls the cart.
    2. My donkey pulls the cart on every Saturday
    3. My donkey Dia pulls the cart
    4. My donkey is genourus than a horse while it pulls the cart
    5. My donkey, which pulls a cart, is very friendly
    6. My donkey pulls the cart very carefully
    7. Dia, my donkey pulls the cart on festivals, birthdays and things like that

    By Khushi

  5. On special days my donkey pulls the cart.
    Sometimes my donkey pulls the cart on and on.
    Monthly my dope , dancing donkey pulls the cart.
    As my donkey pulls the cart he swet’s.
    My donkey who is in his 80’s pulls the cart .
    On special months my dope , dancing donkey who is in his 80’s swet’s on and on while he pulls the cart.

  6. 1.On special ocasitions my donkey pulls the cart.
    2.My donkey pulls the cart on Mondays .
    3.Monthly my marverlous donkey pulls the cart.
    4.As my donkey pulls the cart he is sneezing and coughing .
    5.My donkey who is in his 60s pulls the cart.
    6. As my donkey pulls the cart he coughs .
    7. My pour donkey pulls the hevey cart .

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