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My new book

Hello i have just made my new book after half term you will be able to read it . The book is in chestnut 2 .   Hope you enjoy reading it as its going to be a whole load of books . Have a nice rest of half term and I would be seeing  you at school .

The looking glass girl

julia’s review of: The looking glass girl
Author: Cathy Cassidy
Genre: Non-Fiction

Alice gets stuck in wonder land but really shes in coma . Will Alice wake up from coma and heal the wounds. Find out in the book the looking glass girl. It will appeal to people that use there imagination really well. I liked when Alice got stuck in the basement. I did not like when Alice got pushed off the stairs by lainey (Elaine).

Ripley’s believe it or not

julia’s review of: Ripley’s believe it or not
Author: Robert Ripley
Genre: Fiction

Its a good book if you like facts!! also I rate it 5 out of ten.

Improving simple sentences

See if you can improve this sentence by adding what is asked for?

My donkey pulls the cart.

  1. Add ‘on’ at the beginning of the sentence.
  2. Add ‘on’ at the end of the sentence.
  3. Add in some alliteration
  4. Add a simile.
  5. Drop in a relative clause.
  6. Add an adverbial.
  7. Improve the sentence in your own style.

 

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