See if you can improve this sentence by adding what is asked for?
My donkey pulls the cart.
- Add ‘on’ at the beginning of the sentence.
- Add ‘on’ at the end of the sentence.
- Add in some alliteration
- Add a simile.
- Drop in a relative clause.
- Add an adverbial.
- Improve the sentence in your own style.
Next Month It’s Diwali!!!!! Every Year Someone Plans A Diwali Party! But Sadly U Do Have To Pay For It…. But It’s Worth It!!! Next Month The Party Is Going To Be In London! Btw I Can Get My Friends From School To! So If U Want To Come And Have Some Fun…. Just Comment On My Post, I Will Look At It And Tell My Mom! So See U Guys Later, Goodbye!
Post From Khushi